I came home today
and saw that nothing
had changed.
I crawled into myself
upon seeing more negatives
amongst a world
full of so many
trying positives.
I curled up under sheets
to try again tomorrow,
but instead of
shutting the day out:
I saw it too clearly.
I dug into my eyesockets
and pulled and ripped
until my eyes bled out
and my hands squished
every living sight
that I had grown
to hate so much.
I couldn't stop screaming
but it wasn't because
my eyes were hollow shells,
but because I could still feel
the horror that life could feed.
I bled from blurry holes
to forget what pain there was to life
but I couldn't escape existence
and its never ending sight.
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Life has been hard lately, to put it lightly.
This block of text seems appropriate, though I guess there are still line breaks. That much was probably necessary to help its flow. This is half of what my day was like upon arriving at home after work. The other half being what I felt like doing upon trying to cope with life as it is. Luckily for my sanity, I chose to write this instead of acting it out. I'm not sure if its good, since it's still rather fresh. At least it's a good story of my feelings, I think, rather than a form. Definitely gets to the root of how I imagine the world around me at times. |
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