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©2008-2009 ~dyrwen
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I wrote this, probably last spring now, and it is basically part 4 of my memoir/novel I've been putting off in favor of my other novel right now. This is a description of my room as a teenager, somewhat, as well as the situation. The whole start of the memoir is about digital life, so this poem's form adheres to a syllabic constraint.

The speed of light is 299, 792, 458 m/s. This poem was built with that in mind, so it has 2 syllables, 9 syllables, 9 syllables, 7.. etc. Until it repeats. Light is the underlying fabric of my digital world, so why not implant it into my poetry? Anyway, figured I might as well post something that was on my mind, even if it isn't "new" technically.

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I adore this poem. The topographical image is neat and I am a sucker for strong alliteration, and you nailed it. Very descriptive and sentimental. Good look on your novel!

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